Poets and Lyricist's Corner

[Beef Magic]

Post your Poems and Lyrics please.

No bitching, whining, moaning about other people's poems please in public - PM people if you have any bad comments to say. Otherwise, Good comments are accepted, as is Constructive Criticism (As long as it's quite noteable that it is Criticism and not an excuse to flame)

I'll post some of mine up later.

- Dave

[Ferret Pie]

(no copying or the three headed confused pie mosater will get you (said it was confused))
Sometimes, when i feel bad,
I Wanna smash holes in the walls!
Sometimes, when i feel bad,
I wanna break down all the doors!
(guitar)

I feel like killing everyone,
But i just get up and carry on,
I'm an unexploded bomb!

(there is more but i will do later)

[PiesInTheory]

Dang well on the old forum i had posted a bunches. But hey I'll start from scratch. I'll try my best to steer away from stereotypical lyrics to avoid confrontation. This one is even positive, enjoy.

Lying on the floor with my thoughts
Writing out books in my head that I will use someday
To play out the scenes of my life, the only way
To erase what has already been penciled in
Over what I needed, and all my amends

And Dreams Speak volumes, for the shattered existence I bear

Goodbye is such a tedious word
And saying hello means that I will have to drop my guard someday
The thought of ever becoming what I pictured
Leaves me shocked and feeling withered and decayed
Lacking what I used to be

And Dreams Speak volumes, for what I could never gain

Like a wonderful porcelain vase
that met it's doom to a hard, cold floor
So have I become just pieces of what I used to be

Could you be just what I was waiting for?
When I come into the light will you be there to give me more
Than I ever imagined, isn't that what we all want

[Ferret Pie]

*clap clap clap*

[PiesInTheory]

*bows if anyone is clapping for him*

[skoo]

Here's an oldie - about breakups

Untitled, Unloved.

You made your choice, I didn't have a say,
Didnt get to work on it. It happened anyway.
I tried to talk to you, you pushed me aside,
Smiles to the world, but cold on the inside.
You talk to anyone who'll listen, but not the one who cared,
So forget about the dreams, which we once shared.
Think about your actions, and how they affect me,
I don't need any reminders about how you are so "free"
You get on with your life, and I'll get on with mine,
Thank you for the memories, and all the happy times.

-x-

[Dirt_Monkey]

some nice poems!

i got one i'll post up later. its at school atm:rolleyes:

[Lunchpie]

Going to post a couple of my poems here... I write most of my poems and songs in Norwegian so these are those I have written in English

Poems:

Ecstasy Dream

It's the fin of sin
it's making me grin
and I've been looking up the sky
'cause it's making me high
seeing collours all around
making me feel profound

Living in a dream
it makes me scream
can't fight, can't die
I want to kill someone
So let me out
let me out

Please let me out


For in the shadows they loomed

When the world has ended
We might have offended
The gods of doom
I'll bet that in the dark they loom
Hades and Loke
Out of the eyes come smoke

In to the afterlife they us sends
While we hope for amends
To pain and torture
For all our future
Pain will be our friend
Untill Gid will send
Help at last
And save us from the past

But our world is doomed
For in the shadows they loomed
Save your self

And then one song:

Whats going on?

The people are starvin’
Countries are in ruins
Forests are dyin’
And we are the druids

The numbers are ruling
They make the world go round
The kids have stopped singing
They make no sound

What’s going on in this world of corruption
What’s going on in this world of destruction
What’s going on in this world of reduction
What’s going on?

Our brains has stopped evolving
And the animals has disappeared
But we are continuing destroying
And the world can’t be repaired

We have dug our own grave
It ain’t long now
There’s no one to save
So there's no need to bow

The tree huggers are crying
For our planet that is dyin’
While the rich man is singing
But his ass ain’t worth savin’

What’s going on in this world of corruption
What’s going on in this world of destruction
What’s going on in this world of reduction
What’s going on?

What’s going on?
What’s going on?


Going to put up the melody later...

Just criticise me as much as you want or praise me as your God.
Preferably the latter one.;)

[Dirt_Monkey]

A view-

The builders scurrying around like ants
Building a tarmac field
With their steam roller chugging and bumping along,
The vast green fields
With their long brown lines
And the green and white little people
Chasing like a cheetah, their prey,
The innocent football, unknowing, unaware,
The elusive wind blowing against my face
As soft as silk
Blowing back the green mass of leaves
To reveal their lighter undersides,
Sitting on this coarse granite
Like sandpaper used too many times,
The sun giving its light away
To make everything seem like summer
With its radiant rays shining through the leaves
Catching my eye willing me to look
To where I cannot,
Teacher’s voices drifting through open windows
Just snatches I hear,
People walking past now and again
Teachers looking busy, sixth formers not,
The leaves blow up into my face
Stinging and then going on their way
They rustle past quiet, in contrast to the wind through the trees,
The absent buildings, far off, but not
Blank windows and a grey stare they shoot my way
Lying around in a chaotic way
Curvy roads they must have,
A funnel of some sort poking out over the rooftops
Puffing like a seasoned smoker
Making the houses look like a ferry
Its horn I hear in my head
But yet it is real
I imagine my house ferry setting sail for France
And disappearing into the horizon

[FLYBUYF1]

heres some heavy metal lyrics i havent finished but its my latest work so yeah. I was aiming for lyrics that make sense, but kinda dont make sense if you get me. its actually really hard to do! (see queens of the stone ages lyrics for example)

metal lyrics:

In my head I sit in tears
I feel like shit and its unclear
why I feel. and why I am
why I sit and cry unlike man


the pain seethes inside and burns my head
my stomach churns and i bleed bright red
i blow away the fog and its now clear
why in my head im crying bloody tears


the sky above sits staring
i feel stripped. feel like im bareing
stripping out of my skin stripping down nude
the sky still sits ugly, red and crude


In my head I sit in tears
I feel like shit and its unclear
why I feel. and why I am
why I sit and cry unlike man


My body feels like its for sale
everyone wants a piece of whale
auctioned off to the highest bidder
felling like shit i sit here and wither



:nana: :twisted: :nana:

[flyingmonkey]

I origionally wrote this one for my ex-boyfriend's band. It sounds much better when put to music:

Spare Us:

With the innocence of a newborn foal
we wander this earth
silent, seeking
like the fire that lights our way
we are eternal, yet ever changing
fragile and frail, tough as steel
mortal emotions guide our way
and in the approaching dark we gather
clinging tight, we try to pray

Spare us this night
let us live to see light
protect us from all things dark and unholy
Don't let us be lost
give us your word
and we shall be yours forever more

Yet can anything really be lost?
Is it not a circle,
a merry-go-round without an end?
Sooner or later all things must stop.
Who and what will you be then?
A pious servant to an almighty being
Or a spoiled, ungrateful wraith?
The choice is yours and yours alone
just be sure you can live with the decisions you make.

Spare us this night
let us live to see light
protect us from all things dark and unholy
Don't let us be lost
give us your word
and we shall be yours forever more.

There was another verse but I seem to have forgotten it.

[Ferret Pie]

I'll make a poem/song:
The concequences fall down like cherries,
I feel my life is all to wary,
Feeling the night and the autumn wind,
Crushing the image of my sin,
I see the way to make things right..
But i... Feel the way it sounds,
And i... see the problems and:
Anything i put down gets wiped away, the clock of time just sweeps away,
I know what's right but nothing's wrong,
Until you listen to your own song,
This... is a story,
Of a problem that i'm felling deep inside,
This... is the story,
Of a guy who shouldn't try to sleep at night.
I wonder how many names you have,
You have!
I wonder if your main face
is mad,
Is mad.
So mad........

Good eh, made that on the spot

[PiesInTheory]

Try and figure out what it's about...I tried to disguise the meaning under big words, to an extent...

brushing the sleeve of reality
floating like nothing is left but air
can I catch my life as it speeds ahead of me?
Chasing shadows that are not there

flashbacks of playing in white
how happy was my former self
Evidently you have changed too
or at least my viewpoint has shifted

Tell me I'm ok, not just another dream

Since when was gravity a word that only echoed
on the empty palette it was written on?
Defying my past and parading my future
upon brilliant streaks of evening sky

Tell me what you wanted, is it another curse
upon what is left of me?
Tell me I'm not dreaming, tell me I'm not dreaming
I am something else now and you are the only one who can see it

[Ferret Pie]

I love you pies in theory !!!! :notworthy :notworthy: songs

[PiesInTheory]

Why thank you! I wrote this one for a certain girl.

Not even a word is spoken
And yet it travels to my ears
The look in your eyes was deceiving
I even thought it looked like you cared

Devoted seconds, hours wasted
Screaming out to myself
I lost the last piece to my puzzle
Perhaps you have seen it?
(of course you have)
You held it in your hand right before you let go

Where are all my good reasons now?
What happened to my feelings?

Its sounds so stupid in retrospect
But I believed that my heart didn't lie
You readily brought out swords to finish me off
I wasn't ready to hear about the end yet
Piercing my dreams, how did you do that?
I guess they escaped my head at some point

Moving on. "What did you do today?"

[MU||37]

Here goes some crap I wrote in 20 minutes. I'm not Eliot, so don't expect anything good, hahaha.


Drift

With the moon three-quarters full
I go outside to my darkened backyard,
the tree by the garage rustles
as the wind catches its leave-filled
branches. The only light comes from
the sunlight in China reflecting off our moon.

I lie down in my slightly overgrown lawn.
The grass blades stab at the back of my neck
and at my exposed forearms. They jab
into my lower back. But I lie still and look
up at the moon, three-quarters full,
and I love the light it gives off, pearly
moonlight gives the grass and my skin
a sort of dim, luminescent glow.

The breeze flows over my sprawled body,
the same breeze which rustles the leaves
and the overgrown moonlit lawn grass.
I lay back and serenely watch the clouds
as they drift across the moonlit sky,
and it seems like the clouds float around me.

[PiesInTheory]

I like that, it's so serene. Described to a great extent I can picture myself in the scene so clearly, great job! Perhaps room for development though? It sets a scene it could be interpreted though your thoughts, I don't know sometimes the poetry is all about the environment it puts you in, and I think that one really does it.

[djkt007]

My Saharan Sunset

The colors ripple together,
Golden sands and sky.
The soft rustle of the wind,
A breath on my shadowed brow.
Soft fingers of twilight reach across,
Like hands upon my skin.
Forms writhe together,
Fires burning within.
A touch,
A glance,
A silent wish,
Spoken on the wings of the night.
Angels dash across the sky,
Halos dotting the dark fabric across our eyes.
Purple spreads slowly,
Darkening my sunset and the sands.
The dog howls alone,
Bitter and cold, like the moon.
Prowling forever, wishing and wanting for a light of its own.
The leaves gently rustle,
Like waves across a flaring ocean.
Then my sun is gone and the dark envelopes the land,
And shivering with cold I lie.
The blackest night surrounds me,
An empty, melancholy void.
But then I remember the angel of my own
And the sun rises again in my heart.

[PieKaos]

This is "Determined"

(verse)
I'm determined
Not to let you
Take me
Down that road again.
And I'm determined
Not to let you
Keep your
Stranglehold on my soul.
I'm determined
To never let you
See me
Cry.
And I'm determined
To move on
With my life.

(chorus)
Defiant, I stand
With the Father holding my hand
And my brothers by my side.
Determined, I'm strong
With the hope to carry on
And the need to me to see
Who I will be

(verse)
I'm determined
To be the best man
That I can.
And I'm determined
To keep a grip
On what is real.
I'm determined
Not to let the world
Sway my heart.
And I'm determined
From you my heart,
My soul, I'll part.

(bridge)
I'm not gonna look back
Or dwell on what went wrong.
I'm not gonna yell at you
But put my words into song.
I'm not gonna look at the past
And the time of you and me.
I'll look to the future
That I know that I will see.

(chorus)

(key change)

(chorus 2x)

And "Someone to Live For"

(verse)
In the darkest nights,
In the lightest days,
You're always by my side.
You're there for me,
Helping me
Figure out what's inside.

(chorus)
And I know you're
Someone to live for.
You're by my side
Throughout my life.
And you know I
Am someone to whom can cry
A shoulder to lean on.

(verse)
In the hardest times,
In the easiest,
You're always there.
If I want to cry,
By and by
You'll help me repair.

(chorus)

(bridge)
If I'm going
Down that road,
You pull me back again.
You are helping
Me to see
What it's like in the end.

(chorus 2X)

You're someone.....
To live for.

[mini_ninja_pir8]

ooh,
nicely done PK

got one here,wrote it a month ago,when i was high(or happy,or sad or something)

My One True Love

thinking about this,
thinking about us,
its a possibility,
but its a must

i love you so much,
more than what you can comprehend
without you in my life,
id be goin round the bend

i need to feel you,
one wish i truly need
i cant live without you
one thing you cant see

i want this forever
forever and more
this is a journey,
a key in the door

youre like a zen release
a drug that i really need
something to get me through
a love others cant see

trying to see clearly
getting through this mess
were great together
always and forever

looks dont really matter
i hope you feel the same
sure,you look damn sexy
but is it really important?

i really,really love ya
hope we can keep this up
distance isnt the biggest deal
love was made for us

i feel as though we connect
dont really know what it means
i wish we were a bit older
'coz love's burstin through the seams

i would love to get married
to you of course!
not something to think about now
10 to 15 years later,but getting to know each other is now

i dont know anything about you, although i know how old you are
communication is the key
but damn,the distance is far

people cant say what i need
although all i need is you
they say im stupid
but they havent got a fucking clue

i hope you feel the same
id hate to have a one sided love
its true(in the past) ive always played games...

...but youre my one true love

and yes it was made for mat,so,get over it!!!

[Space Prawn]

A extremely heavy metal song.

Centuries of carnage, centuries of chaos yet unfolding
A planet built on bone, spinning in space unmolded

Armies are arrayed
like toys on table tops it's almost funny

Bodies raped and flayed
the sea is red with blood the sky is sunny

RAAAARGH!
RAAARGH!

Immortal

RAAAARGH!
RAAARGH!

Corruptor

Your entrails are displayed
Upon a rack we break the bones within you
Your fighters are dismayed
And wonder if it is wise to continue

To resist my will
The babies that I bake fill a volcano
I’m clogging up the kill
My wretched baby paste requires Drano

This is really teh poo. It's also way I don't write the lyrics for the band, and why I'm resigned to plinking away on a Moog.

[Beef Magic]

Wow, I forgot about this...

I'll post some GOOD STUFF soon.

[Snoon]

Pessimistic, Optimistic Realist

He's there with the straight jacket
He knows somethin's wrong at home
He's thinkin' thinkin' never stops
But she knows when theres somethin' up

He can do all the equations
He likes the intimidation
He's thinkin' somethin's got to give
But with her nothin' ever lives

All the stories all the tales
Lyin' never seems to fail
Ev'rybody takes it all in
To me it just seems like it's their sin

Open up to prophecies
Fakes and liars, psychic tease
Make your mind up with such ease
The gun it points and now you freeze

It's all in your head, it don't exist
So far from reality, in a twist
If I left today it would I be missed?
I'm the pessimistic, optimistic, realist

It's just general ramblings, I wrote it when I was singing with my old band, but really I just wrote to the music...honest...

[jif-charge]

Here are some of my poems don't worry they are ment to be bad

Breakfast
Egg's come's from the chicken's bum,
I have them for my breakfast YUM!!!
Milk comes from the cows udder, Iput it in my cereal because it tastes nice.

Fire
It's big and red and yellow and it burn's,
and when it hit's you it hurts alot,
I don't like fire

Lampost's
They make our world bright,
And give us loadsa light at night,
so we don't crash in a car,
AND DIE

That's all for now I'll put more in later:weebl:

[AngryPaul]

For a rap song I made :D Be gentle..............

"Shot Down"

I know i had to step up, to defend my little BRO.//
Who knew about that BLOW, feel like i'm on death ROW.//
Little did I KNOW, thats these boy's were packing HEAT.//
Thought they ran tha STREET, but i had to go COMPETE.//
They hassled him relentless, I had to make the STAND.//
Would have done it different, with tha nine held in his HAND//
Those f**kers BANNED, its seems anything GOES.//
Would have beat you one-on-one, swing and catch your NOSE.//

Words should be yo weapon, tha best you can AQUIRE.//
Yo don’t need tha steel, fight back tha bad DESIRE.//
Don’t pull and then fire, think bout yo ACTIONS.//
Wot in tha hell could be a f**king guns ATTRACTIONS?//

Its almost like they CHEAT, work it out wit no TALKING.//
Ma brother they were STALKING, follow all his WALKING.//
They kept on HAWKING, so i had to act and QUICK.//
Wasnt gunna play a TRICK, but i heard tha lil' CLICK.//

Made me feel SICK, i knew what they HAD DONE.//
Seems i'd been OUTDONE, stopped by a MAD GUN.//
Ma decline had BEGUN, my vision was all HAZY.//
No energy, feel LAZY, this aint right, it's CRAZY.//

Imma lie wit tha DAISYS, sloping down to tha GROUND.//
Shit this is PROFOUND, would've taken a mass POUND.//
Instead i heard tha SOUND, of the bullet FLYING IN.//
Now im DYING FRIEND, listen and hear ma CRY WITHIN.//

Hear tha VIOLIN, its playing tha sad dying SONG.//
Thought that i was STRONG, looks like i was WRONG.//
That death toll *DONG*, thats sounds FOR ME.//
Steam fly from tha hole, that they TORE ME.//

My body’s feeling cold, all tired, quite LONELY.//
And its all for ma brother, ma one and ma ONLY.//
I hope he realises, the big sacrifice I MADE.//
I can see it in his eyes, as comes to my AID.//

I look to the sky, wont stop the FLOOD-GOING//
My bro tries his best, but I still see BLOOD-FLOWING.//
I hear the THUD-KNOWING, that it could BE-MA-LAST//
They FLEE-AND-FAST, they’ll AGREE-IM-PAST.//

Im still feeling the BLAST, think of all THAT-I-LOVE.//
I’ll be joining up wit Pac, whos been SAT-ALL-UP-ABOVE//
We didn’t even check, if they were BLACK-ARAB-OR-ASIAN//
Man im fading fast, this is a WHACK-COLLABORATION//

Me and dying don’t mix, man, that’s NOT-MY-STYLE.//
I’ve been CAUGHT-ON-TRIAL, but now im SHOT-THAS-VILE//
I was NOT-HOSTILE, looking OUT-FOR-FAMILY//
We all stick together but watch OUT-FOR-TRADEGY//

This starts WAR SEE, more blood on tha STREET.//
Look to ma DEFEAT, you work it out on tha BEAT.//
Tha BS3 ELITE , will go avenge ma DEATH.//
Go avenge tha THEFT, cos they took ma last BREATH.//

This is a big message to those fake-ass RUDE-BOYS.//
Put those gats away sons, thos aint FEUD-TOYS.//
How f**ked are you if you get the CRUDE-JOYS.//
They only kill the streets and create the MUTE-NOISE.//

(Repeat)
This is a big message to those fake-ass RUDE-BOYS.//
Put those gats away sons, thos aint FEUD-TOYS.//
How f**ked are you if you get the CRUDE-JOYS.//
They only kill the streets and create the MUTE-NOISE.//

[qwerto]

Originally posted by skoo
Here's an oldie - about breakups

Untitled, Unloved.

You made your choice, I didn't have a say,
Didnt get to work on it. It happened anyway.
I tried to talk to you, you pushed me aside,
Smiles to the world, but cold on the inside.
You talk to anyone who'll listen, but not the one who cared,
So forget about the dreams, which we once shared.
Think about your actions, and how they affect me,
I don't need any reminders about how you are so "free"
You get on with your life, and I'll get on with mine,
Thank you for the memories, and all the happy times.

-x-

WOW i never knew skoo liked music!

[Shave]

here's a depressing little number from my personal song collection (which means i've got more:( )

I'll Be Done

I lock myself inside my room
I'm full of sorrow, full of gloom
i pass the time, i'm all alone
i like here on my own
out the window, I throw the key
i'll stay here for eternity
i'll rot away, i'll wither and die
like i've done for most my life

just another face in the crowd
lost and lonely, i am proud
they won't miss me when i'm down
in the depths of hell underground
i'll burn hotter than the sun
i'll be finished when i'm well done
before i go i will consume
some alcohol in my room

the alcohol in my blood
will make vision clear as mud
unsure of what to do next
consult the demons in my head
they encourage me to ignite
the box of matches on my bedside
i laugh as i burn on the floor
i am no longer anymore

[Beef Magic]

Here's a song which is downloadable from here (http://www.soundclick.com/crueltobekind). It's called Frank, it's amazing. Download it kiddies!

Frank

I knew Frank
Frank was a cat
Frank once lived
with me in a flat
But one day
Frank went out in the road
He hit by a car
It was a Volvo

Now Frank is dead
He's six feet, under the ground
He's dead
He's dead
He's dead
He's dead Frank

Frank is dead
He's a dead Frank

Dead Frank

[Shave]

Originally posted by Beef Magic
Frank

knew Frank
Frank was a cat
Frank once lived
with me in a flat
But one day
Frank went out in the road
He hit by a car
It was a Volvo

Now Frank is dead
He's six feet, under the ground
He's dead
He's dead
He's dead
He's dead Frank

Frank is dead
He's a dead Frank

Dead Frank

haven't downloaded the song, but the lyrics made me laugh. + for you

[mini_ninja_pir8]

ive written a new poem
and,it has no title



looking back on things that were said
im the only one,inside of your head
teasing,screaming,finding things you think are wrong
which is why i wrote this lamish song
for all the things ive said,and all the things ive done
kinda hard to think,that i put you at number one

angry,mad,sooo damn sad
motherf**ker,what did i do that was bad?
torn,worn,cheated inside
its my turn,to make you run and hide

revenge is sweet,but so is is candy
guns are shit,but blood is handy
slitting my wrists,i know its not right
but i found out,that fateful night
you made her feels speshful,
better than me
gonna make you squirm
gonna make you see

i thought you loved me
but now thats all wrong
the only reason you "loved" me
was to get into my thong

you said it was for the best
coz we wernt right
now i know,its been put to rest
you think shes all that,while im cold at night

dont try to make me feel good
cause the damage has already been done
dont try to be a good boy
because our relationship was for your fun

ive moved on,
met someone new,
hes the best
better than you

this shows how much i hate you
how much i want you gone
listen to my lyrics
THATS WHY I WROTE YOU THIS FUCKING SONG!

(oh,it doesnt reflect any part of my life now,n0t one bit whatsoever)

[Salvation Dali]

Oh me
Oh my
All in
My eye
Some crumpled blades
Of moving grass
That blur to yellow
through stained glass
And trampled concrete
Lying dead
To rest upon
Their muddy bed
A thousand leaves
to disappear
From branch to dust
Trees far and near
Forgotten flowers
Standing strong
But bowing down
As time goes on
A silver cat
Lost and alone
bewildered, hopeful
to find a home
The green-grey garden
Is always there
But I don't see it;
I don't care.

OOH THAT WAS A BIT POETIC. it wasn't meant to be serious but it just made itself as i went along. mmm