New cartoon: "Cheating"

[Scribbly]

Weebl did the characters, kess the ninja pirate did the story and additional characters and I put it all in one neat little flash file.

Click here. (http://members.lycos.nl/weeblnbob/stuff/weeblavatar/cheating.swf)

Enjoy.

[BlueHippo]

*claps* not bad :)

[fishymcfish]

i like it, even without voices, tyhje story is good and the animation is good

*claps also*

[bufo]

I think it's good you left away the voices. That's where most imitations spoil it, this is nice:)

[cow_cop]

the pie girl will give me nightmares forever.

[kessninjapirate]

Thanks so much! I love it! :D

k.t.n.p. x

[Scribbly]

Good :)

[Smeagle]

Oh, I love that! You two make a great team.

You should make more together, Kess doing the comics and you animating them :D

[Fruiterian]

ehm, can i give some constructive criticism on this? Please don't be insulted by any of this. i'm just trying to give suggestions to make it better.

with pie girl and kess the ninja pirate, their lines aren't as thick as weebl, bob, and chris'. try to make the art more fluid: as if your characters belong there, not as if they're in a guest type fan art thing.

secondly, the speech bubbles. some of them were a little oddly shaped. the ones at the end were perfectly smooth, but others were a little off. and weebl's eyes at the end: they're jagged... it wouldn't be much effort to fix it, would it?

and bob being blown away. the shadow is still directly on his butt if i recall correctly. have the shadow follow in on the ground as he flips in the air and falls back down. or something. then he rolls back and sees what weebl is doing.

the characters themselves and the storyline is brilliant. keep up the good work. -_O

once again, my apologies if you are insulted.

[Mich]

lol.....pie-nography...that's funny :)

[Stevotheclown]

Wow coool! I love. You should do the other episodes to.

[Sorlok]

Wow! thats actualy fantastic!! =)

A little slow, and the pie-girl as a little querky... but other then that... amazing...!!

[Scribbly]

Originally posted by Fruiterian
once again, my apologies if you are insulted.

none taken =)
feedback is very important in order to make things nicer; so.. thanks!

It's just that.. well.. I spend quite a lot of time on it and can't be bothered to make adjustments. Maybe tomorrow if I get bored :)



check my new thingy out!:
http://www.weebls-stuff.com/forums/showthread.php?s=&threadid=1823

[-Yami-Kitty-]

reminds meh of american pie.. O_o

[Kitty_Weebl]

that spin the weebl is awesome! :D i spent ages makin different ones lol i'm easily entertained

[Klariza]

i lmao at that cartoon - that pie girl is soo freaky!!! lol and all of them weebls!!

very good i loved it - where did u get the music from out of interest?

[Scribbly]

They're from weebl and bob episodes ("Donkey" and "Cleaner")