FallDog's Poetry "place"

[FallDog_gothic]

Ok, I'm back in business, but let me first address this:

Shane: Your poetry is of pure emotional reality, absent of fear and sculpture of generality. A true speaker. Wonderful descriptions that made everything flow as water. You wear your heart on your sleeve.

djkt007: Your command of adjectives is amazing. There is not one thing you cannot describe. The endless imagery you exhibit is simply fantastic. You paint pictures of beauty with your words.

nutnoodle: You expertly convey whichever feeling you desire. Your words turn feelings into stories, thoughts into material descriptions. You expertly wield the power of cause and effect.

Empty Pie Dish: You simply write beautifully. Your words illustrate your obvious quick wit. The excellent phrases you use put me at awe. "sculpted by hands of self belief" "eyes that undressed the already bare" extraordinary.

Epithets:
Shane, The poet of reailty
djkt007, the commander of imagery
Empty Pie Dish, the master of diction
nutnoodle, the manifestor of emotion

[FallDog_gothic]

k, start poetry.

Nor metal nor steam can stop me
in a boiling trance of ecstacy
where devils grin as immaterial bane
leaving behind the invisibly slain
in a world of living secretly free
nor metal nor steam will stop me
and jewelry strewn across the dead
dances in the devil's head
and those would preach aginst him
like the absent leagions of the seraphim
the message they could provide
would only stand by the devil's side
it said:
we are the kings of a holy legion
bashful in your sinning region
we are the gaurds of peace and love
shining saviours from above
and we spread our peaceful eye

but in the likeness of a lie
that said:
supremist dictator i am
holding evil within your land
being dead and being glad
the racist
putrid
live and sad

so bear me on in television land
don't let me rest in your god's hand
and hurt me in the face of jewels
forget to spare me in fasion duels
just put the people in their place
to save and rejuvenate their grace
trouble me and you will see
no metal nor steam will stop me


did you know in face, that when we similed, we left alot to be desired. When we skipped out in blacked boots, and trampled on our own time, we never saw we lost, and we never will. But that is such as one another and again after.
Just as cryptic as they come.
When will they ever learn.

[Shave]

can anyone post in here or is it for your poetry?

[FallDog_gothic]

Anyone can post.

[FallDog_gothic]

who would make us to be free
resist the greatest strains of empathy
we as children of the earth
with no time to suceed in rebirth
we broke the grandness of an age
replaced it with a crying sage
a new religion a new great
indulging in the weapons of knowing hate
but now a road will seem to cease
forgetting how to learn in times of peace
but we row our lowly love
in hopes of a vision from above
but there's always been a sky
without a scathe of a sigh
and we broke our only joke
to dance in ephinay and soak
never what the writing could make
when the thoughts were straight and fake
and we can finally leave
and we can finally grieve
but we won't because we've grace
keeping us in our royal place
now we've planted seeds of a sound
now we've planted seeds to be found
the road of course, will cease to cease
but remain may the peace.
GENTLE SHOULD HAVE BEEN THE RACE THAT WOULD BUILD AND DEMOLISH
TAME SHOULD HAVE BEEN THE CREATURE THAT COULD FEED AND DEVOUR
GOOD SHOULD HAVE BEEN THE antithetical dreams of the self

anyone can post.

[Shave]

i posted my poetry in general weebl and pap and these are the best ones from there:

Something Borrowed, Something Blue

Something borrowed, something blue
You sit alone and look right through
The mirror to the other side
It’s time to make yourself a bride
Walk on past the staring eyes
Up to the altar you utter a sigh
The eternal burden of being a wife
It’s time for you to commit your life
Into the hands of someone you knew
Something borrowed, something blue

Something borrowed, something blue
Onto the honeymoon you flew
Unwilling to enjoy and relax
Paranoid of unseen attacks
Stuck in your mind with your thoughts
There’s something wrong and it’s all your fault
The husband you think you love
But you can never be reassured enough
That it’s your ultimate choice to continue
Something borrowed, something blue

Something borrowed, something blue
There’s nothing else for you to do
Run away from you fantasy
It’s not what you want it to be
Your heart no longer yearns
Fearful that he might return
To fulfil his true love vow
And take you in his arms right now
It won’t happen, you start over new
Something borrowed something blue

Angel Eyes

Look at me
How beautiful you are
Your angel eyes
Like a shining star
You take my hand
And walk me round
I am so high
My feet leave the ground
Then I find out
You’ve been cheating on me
With all the trust
That came easily
You used it as
A dagger for my heart
I watched you go
As it all fell apart
You left me where
You let me down
No longer do you
Walk me round
I can’t sleep
And it’s no surprise
As all I see
Are your angel eyes

Emptiness

The emptiness of sorrow
Tears a whole from within
As I lie next to you

Not knowing where I’m going
Not knowing where I’m from
It eats me up inside

The truth often hurts
I keep it hidden from you
Dishonestly forever

No use to you now
You’d be better off without me
There’s one way to help you

I end it all tonight
My dreams and yours
All because of the emptiness of sorrow

The eternal confessions of a self-absorbed mind

I am suffering
At the loss of a good friend
But pain is temporary
It goes away in the end
Why couldn’t I see
Beyond my selfish ideals
I want you to come back soon
So I can run by your heels

If only I had thought of you
Then maybe you’d still be here
But I was self-absorbed
Trapped behind my fears
I wish I could change your mind
I wish I could make you see
You were the centre of my universe
That’s what you meant to me

It’s to late to change that
And I hate myself for it so
I will turn in the opposite direction
And run from what I know
I won’t be coming back
Until I’ve finally grown
Then maybe we’ll meet again someday
On that long and winding road

[PJ]

Angel Eyes

Look at me
How beautiful you are
Your angel eyes
Like a shining star
You take my hand
And walk me round
I am so high
My feet leave the ground
Then I find out
You’ve been cheating on me
With all the trust
That came easily
You used it as
A dagger for my heart
I watched you go
As it all fell apart
You left me where
You let me down
No longer do you
Walk me round
I can’t sleep
And it’s no surprise
As all I see
Are your angel eyes

You should make that a song it is brilliant i love that one above the rest :notworthy .


I can't live
I can't live this way,
With this stalker,
And me as her prey.

She dosent listen,
And i cant see,
How her eyes glisten,
On to me.

With this she knows,
I hate to be followed,
she gave me a rose,
wich is velvet sewed.

That was my first try at poetry it sucks i know, but oh well.

[Shave]

Alienation

I am sitting here
Waiting for something that’ll never come
I am hopeful
I am always so dumb
She left me by myself
With no one to accompany me
The last words I heard were
Shut up and let me be
I now realise
It’s nothing that I do
Nothing that I did
Or nothing that I said to you
The problem was
You saw yourself in me
You couldn’t bear the burden
Of giving yourself pity

[FallDog_gothic]

out-of-place-boy:
you're putrid as the rest of you race boy
a disgusting example of grace boy

but you're lovely now
your silver death
your selfish frown
your simple breath

And you're gonna meet me
And you may not see
my custody's grown
and i'm all alone

do you like sovereign love
yeah it's polluted these days

but scareligion, holiness
ecstacy and the rest
are nothing but what I detest

do you like trial life
yeah, is barren these days

but evolution, loving hate
destitution, living fate

i never saw an ugly beatuiful face until i saw your rotting carcass of a pretty life that's young and few but all too strung on coffe concepts, divinity, worshiping your youthful trinity...

Out-of-place-boy
you've caught yourself in a space boy
and you've left no honorable trace boy

but sands and destruction wills
will drink up the blood it spills
writing you silly wiles
you taint all you idle smiles

But i don't care
how you wear
your painted clothes
the paths you chose
you worthless
ugly
terrifying piece of pity
out-of-place-boy
you putrid piece of a race boy
you disgusting example of grace boy
dont ever worship me
dont ever betray me
but it's late for repetition
just swallow all the rabid perdition

i'll cover you for the night
ill cover you out of spite.
i'll smother you with delight.
AS my own light
was crippled by the blight
of a beauty
and a race of youth
like you:





a little wierd, yes.
by the way, all my props go otu to shane, cause he is posting great stuff in my thread

[hoogiman]

The room

Here I am,
Standing in the deserted room,
It's cramped,
It's clustered,
I feel no space,
I feel scared,
I feel terrified,
Nervous, Petrified,
I feel unsafe,
I feel insecure,
I feel alone,
Nervous, Afraid,
What sits there is,
An old book,
Lying there,
Stationery.
Dust crowds the air,
As I open it,
Then I feel,
Mixed emotions,
I feel pain,
Yet happiness.
I turn the old,
Ripped book's page,
Until suddenly,
I feel afraid,
Very afraid,
I shut my eyes,
My heart feels weak,
My hands go numb,
My spine starts to shiver,
I grab an unstable chair,
Pick it up,
And hold it against
The door,
I've panicked inside,
I feel weaker,
I panic again.
I grab the old,
dusty bookshelf,
I push it against
The door,
I try to open the window,
I may escape,
But I start to panic,
My hand gets stuck,
The big black figure,
Comes in towards me,
It's the end,
For me,
In this deserted room.

[Shave]

Hollow

the hollow of your skull
the emptiness of it all
the blank expression on your face
the sullen grin you embrace
in all my time i've never seen
a soul so pure yet so unclean
eyes glisten with a spark
it's time for you to embark
on the journey of life that will unfurl
and take your first steps into the world
while i hold you in my arms this morn
my precious child, my new born

[lellykelly]

This is nothing special, just a poem i wrote when i was feeling down quite a while ago.

Goodbye Love

Love is a strong word i wish i never had to say,
giving my heart away day after day.
Love is a strong word but i said it to you,
knowing how i felt, so deep and so true.
Love is a strong word, you once said to me,
little did i know it wasn't meant to be.
Love is a strong word, and now i take it back,
burn it with my memories and tears i held back.

[Shave]

this is a paradoy of "what's my age again" by Blink 182. i've only done the first verse and chorus but i might add more later:

What’s Your Age Again

Shut you out
It was a Friday night
Left you alone
You were cold outside
They had thrown you out
And you had no chance
You thought they were you family…

And that’s about the time they walked away from you
Nobody likes you when you eighty-two
Family don’t even seem to see
What the hell is O.A.P
Your family hate your age
What’s your age again?
What’s your age again?

[Piemaster3000]

Around, all around, the mourners gather.
My dread grows as the dagger of your words falls against my heart.
It crushes me, and darkly my
lifes blood drips
to the thirsty earth.
In horror I call your name
while my doom follows.
Now alone, my love falls upon uncaring eyes.

This is because of you

[argh]

*whores out some of her poems* Mwa ha ha!

Shy Little Girl
Shy little girl, with a shy little grin
Living in a world of violent sin
Shy little girl with a mysterious pain,
Dying in the streets, dying in the rain.
Shy little girl's mom does years ago,
Shy little girls dad buried her in the snow.
Dad used to get mad at his daughter,
Thinking, planning about her slaughter.
Shy little girl still loved her dad,
Even when he beat her, made her sad.
Left her for days without an excuse
Came back and made up for missed abuse.
Made her bleed, made her pass out.
Told her he'd kill she if she'd shout.
Shy little girl still loved her father,
Though to him she was only a bother.
So one day he took her out to the street.
He looked around and started to beat,
The little girl until she was dying,
All the while she was never crying.
Shy little girls heart stopped it's beat.
And her dad left her alone, in the rain, on the street.

Arianna
Arianna, how do you like your tea?
You've always been so good to me,
I told you I'd make it up one day,
why do you always sit that way?
Arianna, so close to death,
I can taste the bitter on your breath.
I still have such love for you
THAT YOU'RE NOT ALLOWED TO DIE!
Wake up, it's time for your medication,
even though you think death would be a salvation.
I don't know what I'd do without my Arianna,
SO YOU'RE NOT ALLOWED TO DIE!
You can't slip peaceful in your sleep.
I'll never let your slumber get that deep.
I watch you when theres knives around,
I hear every muffled sound.
Why do you hate me, we used to love each other,
then you left and tried to find another.
It took so long, to get you back,
THAT YOU'RE NOT ALLOWED TO DIE!
Arianna, I love to play with your hair.
I don't love it when you creepily stare,
at the door, you'd love to be free,
but you're NEVER allowed to leave me.
I'd be devestated if you ever go.
My love for you hurts me so.
I cry EVERY time I think of you.
SO YOU'RE NOT ALLOWED TO DIE!
BREATH ARIANNA, BREATH!
WHY WON'T YOUR HEART BEAT?
Arianna, you're not allowed to die!
OH GOD! Don't leave me alone!
Arianna!
PLEASE NO ARIANNA!
I love you soo much Arianna!
You're never leaving me.
You'll be my prescious forever.
I'll never let them take you away from me.
At least now you won't be so anxious to get away

[Shave]

Enjoy The Silence

Don’t talk; you’ll spoil the moment
Sit here, enjoy the silence
Don’t Leave, I can’t be without you
Trust Me, I’ll no longer doubt you
Follow, me to the edge and
Listen, to what’s being said and
Promise, you’ll always love me
Don’t cry, to me you’re lovely

Let’s go, but wait for me and
Go home, I don’t like it here and
Hold on, I don’t want to lose you
Relax; I’m not going to use you
Calm down, we’ll be alright
Sleep now, it’s gone midnight
Mistake, is it just careless
Be true, or couldn’t you care less

Today, it is the greatest
Be strong, I know you hate this
Perfect, just like a Goddess
It’s true, don’t be so modest
Faithful, I know you will be
Fateful, it’s destiny
Hello, now it’s goodbye
I’ll love you, until I die.

[Shave]

Blind

The disdained look you give
Yet I always seem to forgive
Even though it’s plain to see
That you are ashamed of me
I can see it in your smile
But maybe for a while
You can embrace me in your hands
And take me for what I am
If you look through your false ideals
Which cover up the real
You’ll see me shining through
From somewhere you never knew
You were ignorant to the truth
That I was worthier than you
So you concealed my hidden side
And I had no one to confide
About you enclosing ways
Which I hold with me today
So you can finally see
What it’s like to be me

[king_kihl]

A Poem

A Poem
Is that all I am to you
To read
Is that all you will do with me
I am his emotion
Her emotion
I am straight from the heart
And you read me
But do you feel me?
You never felt him either
That is why I am here
He needed you
I was his only hope
His last chance
Only a poem
Put down on paper
To be thrown away
Burnt so badly
Just like you did him
Left alone for so long
Came back for a while
But it was only a look
And now im gone
We were only trash to you
No more than a poem

~Ki'hl Baker

[argh]

And now for a little lighthearted comical poetry......

Amish Love

when we first me, no one would bet,
i'd be falling for you
you tipped your hat, and i just sat,
and gave a small wave to you
now we hang out in your field
this years harvest as our shield
aw we hold hands in the hay
i hope my dad will let me marry you someday
when i go to be, i thouch my head
you kissed me on my cheek
i lifted my skirt, and brushed off some dirt
and gave you a little peek
or my ankle, what a scandle
a bit more than you could handle
you pulle dmy skirt to where it was last
and said "mary we're going a bit too fast"
so we went home, i picked up my comb
and started to brush my hair
if we wern't amish, i could promis
we would make a lovely pair
as i tie my hair in a bun
i think about what i have done
about my sock i almost shed
i should have waited 'till we were wed.

[Shave]

Save Me From Myself

The blank oblivion of my hopeless mind
You left me nothing when you left my side
The empty void I have yet to fill
I want you to stay but I can’t change free will
I’ll never be the man I was
Without you to back me up
I never realised how much I took you for granted
Until you left and I was left frantic
Without you I’m everything that I swore
I’d never become, I’m on the floor
I’ve drunk myself half to death
I can barely stand up and I’m a mess
I just hope you’ll return before to long
To save me from myself and what I’ve become