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Altf4
14-01-2006, 12:13 AM
I wrote this article about 4 or 5 months ago, and I'm still pretty proud of it.


CLICK HERE FOR A STORY WITH ACTION, ADVENTURE AND PUPPIES! (http://www.elohtibbar.com/writing/puppies.htm)

HeavyT
14-01-2006, 12:40 AM
Umm...I honestly dont know what to say. There are some parts in there I couldn't understand at all and the grammar wasn't that great; yet there were parts I kinda chuckled at.

Umm...yeah.

Nevermore
14-01-2006, 01:19 AM
That was hilarious! Seriously, Loved it and all it's sillyness. Some spelling/grammar mistakes though but it was still FRICKEN FUNNY.

I plus and hug and lick you and your puppy story.

"I sure as fuck am eating my celery tonight." XD

Mr.Sandwich
14-01-2006, 02:41 AM
You are one messed up son of a bitch

Altf4
14-01-2006, 02:46 AM
Umm...I honestly dont know what to say. There are some parts in there I couldn't understand at all and the grammar wasn't that great; yet there were parts I kinda chuckled at.

Umm...yeah.

Most of the grammar is intentional, it's told fromt he perspecitive and writing style of a little boy.

Thanks for the compliments.

IrishSteve
14-01-2006, 11:08 AM
Despite the fact I think you may be insane, I thought it was great. Truly random.

Mittwoch
14-01-2006, 12:02 PM
I love that :D somebody give this guy an internets.