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crab
07-07-2007, 01:04 PM
A game concept that came to me in a dream: I begin by submitting a haiku. The next person changes a single word, and so on. The rules are:

1) It must follow strict haiku meter (5/7/5)
2) It must contain a season reference
3) It must not be a repetition of a previous haiku
4) It must have two enjambed lines
5) Each haiku must make sense on its own

With no further ado:

Lovers with the sweet
Blossom captured in their hair
The seeds are growing

Gonk
09-07-2007, 12:16 PM
Lovers with the sweet
Blossom captured in their Cheese
The seeds are growing

Emptyspraycan
09-07-2007, 01:56 PM
Clovers with the sweet
Blossom captured in their Cheese
The seeds are growing

RadioactiveHam
09-07-2007, 02:26 PM
Clovers with the sweet
Blossom captured in their Geese
The seeds are growing

Emptyspraycan
09-07-2007, 03:34 PM
Clovers have the sweet
Blossom captured in their Geese
The seeds are growing

paresol
09-07-2007, 03:51 PM
Clovers have the sweet
Blossom captured in their Geese
The cows are growing.

Emptyspraycan
09-07-2007, 04:02 PM
Clovers have the sweet
Blossom captured in their Geese
The cows are dying.

paresol
09-07-2007, 04:04 PM
Clovers have the sweet
Lemons captured in their Geese
The cows are dying.

Emptyspraycan
09-07-2007, 04:09 PM
Clovers have the sweet
Lemons captured by their Geese
The cows are dying.

Qu1f
09-07-2007, 04:12 PM
Clovers have the Sweet
Lemons captured by their Geese
The Cows are flying.

paresol
09-07-2007, 04:13 PM
Clovers have the sweet
Lemons captured by their feet
The cows are flying.

Emptyspraycan
09-07-2007, 04:13 PM
Clovers have the sweet
Lemons captured by the feet
The cows are flying.

paresol
09-07-2007, 04:21 PM
Clovers are the sweet
lemons captured by the feet
The cows are flying

RadioactiveHam
09-07-2007, 04:26 PM
Clovers are the sweet
lemons stolen by the feet
The cows are flying

paresol
09-07-2007, 04:28 PM
Clovers are the gold
lemons stolen by the feet
the cows are flying.

Mister Qwerty
09-07-2007, 04:31 PM
Clovers are the gold
lemons stolen by the feet
the cows are crying.

Qu1f
09-07-2007, 05:02 PM
Clovers are the gold
Lemons stolen by the Beat
The cows are crying.

RadioactiveHam
09-07-2007, 06:35 PM
Clovers are the gold
Lizards stolen by the Beat
The cows are crying.

paresol
09-07-2007, 07:10 PM
Clovers are the gold
Lizards stolen by the beat
The shoes are crying.

Emptyspraycan
09-07-2007, 07:12 PM
Clovers are the gold
lemons stolen by the feet
the fruit are flying.

RadioactiveHam
09-07-2007, 07:16 PM
Clovers are the gold
lemons stolen by the feet
the fruit are flying.
You have changed 4 things... Pick one!

I'll edit Paresol's one...

Hoovers are the gold
Lizards stolen by the beat
The shoes are crying.

Emptyspraycan
09-07-2007, 07:20 PM
oh sorry I accidently copied a previous one.

Hoovers are the gold
Lizards stolen by the drums
The shoes are crying.

RadioactiveHam
09-07-2007, 07:24 PM
Hoovers are the gold
Lizards destroyed by the drums
The shoes are crying.

paresol
09-07-2007, 09:08 PM
Shiny are the gold
Lizards destroyed by the drums
The shoes are crying.

Emptyspraycan
10-07-2007, 05:54 AM
Shiny are the gold
Lizards destroyed by the drums
The snakes are crying.

Gonk
10-07-2007, 08:12 AM
Shiny are the gold
Lizards destroyed by the cats
The snakes are crying.

Scuffles
10-07-2007, 09:53 AM
Shiny are the gold
Lizards eaten by the cats <-- (7 syllalalalabbles here please)
The snakes are crying.

RadioactiveHam
10-07-2007, 10:34 AM
Shiny are the gold
Lizards eaten by the cats
The rakes are crying.

Emptyspraycan
10-07-2007, 12:10 PM
Shiny is the gold
Lizards eaten by the cats
The rakes are crying.

RadioactiveHam
10-07-2007, 12:30 PM
Shiny is the gold
Blizzards eaten by the cats
The rakes are crying.

Qu1f
10-07-2007, 04:04 PM
Tiny is the gold
Blizzards eaten by the cats
The rakes are crying

RadioactiveHam
10-07-2007, 04:30 PM
Tiny is the gold
Vegans eaten by the cats
The rakes are crying

feeshy
10-07-2007, 04:31 PM
Tiny is the gold
Vegans eaten by the cats
The mice are crying

RadioactiveHam
10-07-2007, 04:55 PM
Tiny is the gold
Vegans eaten by the cats
The mice are dieing

Qu1f
10-07-2007, 05:49 PM
Tiny is the Bold
Vegans Eaten by the Cats
The mice are dieing.

RadioactiveHam
10-07-2007, 06:02 PM
Tiny is the Bold
Vegans Eaten by the Cats
The Drunks are dieing.

Qu1f
10-07-2007, 06:04 PM
Tiny is the Bold
Vegans Eaten by the Cats
The Drunks are flying.



/// I can see similar words are used time and time again.///

Mister Qwerty
10-07-2007, 06:14 PM
Tiny fight the bold
Vegans eaten by the cats
The drunks are flying.

Qu1f
10-07-2007, 06:18 PM
Tiny fight the bold
Vegans eaten by the Bats
The drunks are flying.

Mister Qwerty
10-07-2007, 06:21 PM
Irish fight the bold
Vegans eaten by the bats
The drunks are flying.

RadioactiveHam
10-07-2007, 07:16 PM
Irish fight the Old
Vegans eaten by the bats
The drunks are flying.

paresol
10-07-2007, 07:24 PM
Irish fight the old
glasses eaten by the bats
The drunks are flying.

Emptyspraycan
10-07-2007, 09:22 PM
Irish find the old
glasses eaten by the bats
The drunks are flying.

paresol
10-07-2007, 09:30 PM
Irish find the old
glasses stolen by the bats
the drunks are flying

Qu1f
11-07-2007, 04:08 PM
Irish Find the Gold
Glasses stolen by Bats
The drunks are flying.

RadioactiveHam
11-07-2007, 04:16 PM
Irish Find the Gold
Glasses stolen by Bats
The sheep are flying.

paresol
11-07-2007, 04:23 PM
Smileys find the gold
glasses stolen by the bats
the sheep are flying

Qu1f
11-07-2007, 07:51 PM
Smileys seak the gold
Glasses stolen by the bats
the sheep are flying.

RadioactiveHam
11-07-2007, 07:52 PM
Smileys seak the gold
Glasses stolen by the bats
The sheep is flying.

Qu1f
11-07-2007, 07:57 PM
Smilers seek the gold
Glasses stolen by the bats
the sheep is flying


//I changed the spelling on seek///

RadioactiveHam
11-07-2007, 07:58 PM
Smilers seek the gold
Glasses stolen by the bats
The couch is flying!

Scuffles
11-07-2007, 11:29 PM
Smilers seek the gold
Glasses stolen by the bats
The couch is dying (how rare)

Emptyspraycan
12-07-2007, 06:10 AM
Rhinos seek the gold
Glasses stolen by the bats
The couch is dying

RadioactiveHam
12-07-2007, 11:26 AM
Rhinos seek the gold
Glasses stolen by the bats
A couch is dying

Zenym
12-07-2007, 03:13 PM
People seek the gold
glasses stolen by the bats
a couch is dying

RadioactiveHam
12-07-2007, 03:50 PM
People seek the gold
glasses stolen by the bats
A couch is burning

Qu1f
12-07-2007, 03:54 PM
People seek the gold
Shadows stolen by the bats
A couch is Burning

Zenym
12-07-2007, 04:09 PM
People seek the gold
shadows stolen by the bats
a light is burning.

RadioactiveHam
12-07-2007, 04:49 PM
People seek the gold
shadows watched by the bats
a light is burning.

Zenym
12-07-2007, 05:05 PM
People seek the dark
shadows watched by the bats
a light is burning

Qu1f
12-07-2007, 05:06 PM
People seek the dark
Shadows watched by the bats
A light is shining

Zenym
12-07-2007, 05:11 PM
Heroes seek the dark
Shadows watched by the bats
A light is shining.

RadioactiveHam
12-07-2007, 05:37 PM
Heroes seek the dark
T.V. watched by the bats
A light is shining

crab
12-07-2007, 06:08 PM
People seek the dark
Aurora watched by the bats
A light is shining

(also holy shit guys this took off suddenly)
P.S. you aren't keeping to meter or season damnit, reworked

RadioactiveHam
12-07-2007, 06:19 PM
People seek the light
Aurora watched by the bats
A light is shining

Zenym
12-07-2007, 07:49 PM
Radioactive ham changed two things.

Heroes seek the dark
Aurora watched by the bats
A star is shining.

RadioactiveHam
12-07-2007, 07:51 PM
Heroes seek the light
Aurora watched by the Cats
A star is shining

I accidentily changed Heroes but light should still count...

Emptyspraycan
13-07-2007, 06:35 AM
Heroes seek the light
Aurora watched by the frogs
A star is shining

crab
13-07-2007, 05:00 PM
Heroes seek the light
Aurora brought by the frogs
A star is shining

RadioactiveHam
13-07-2007, 05:53 PM
Heroes want the light
Aurora brought by the frogs
A star is shining

an_reithe
16-07-2007, 09:24 PM
Heroes want the light
Aurora sucked by the frogs
A star is shining

Swirl
16-07-2007, 10:11 PM
Heroes want the light
Aurora sucked by the cod
A star is shining

sursmiley
17-07-2007, 10:37 AM
Heroes want the light
Aurora sucked by the cod
A screen is shining

Mister Qwerty
17-07-2007, 03:13 PM
Angels want the light
Aurora sucked by the cod
A screen is shining

doodette
17-07-2007, 03:36 PM
Bagels want the light
Aurora sucked by the cod
A screen is shining

Mister Qwerty
17-07-2007, 03:47 PM
Bagels want the Philly
Aurora sucked by the cod
A screen is shining.

magmo25
25-07-2007, 08:31 PM
Bagels want the Philly
Aurora sucked by the cod
A toilet is shining.

Rook
25-07-2007, 08:33 PM
Bagels want the Buttplug
Aurora sucked by the cod
A toilet is shining.

Mister Qwerty
26-07-2007, 11:54 AM
Bagels want the buttplug
Aurora sucked by the sky
A toilet is shining.

RadioactiveHam
30-07-2007, 11:02 AM
Bagels want the buttplug
Carpenters sucked by the sky (It's now 7 syllables...)
A toilet is shining.

crab
30-07-2007, 09:13 PM
Bagels want the aged
Carpenters sucked by the sky
A toilet, shining

(fixing meter)

Bappel
30-07-2007, 09:21 PM
Jewish want the aged
Carpenters sucked by the sky
A toilet, shining

RadioactiveHam
31-07-2007, 12:15 AM
Jewish want the aged
Carpenters soaked by the sky
A toilet, shining

TheMattfish
13-09-2007, 06:19 AM
Jewish want the aged
Carpenters soaked by the sky
A toilet blockage

RadioactiveHam
13-09-2007, 07:43 AM
Jewish haunt the aged
Carpenters soaked by the sky
A toilet blockage

TheMattfish
13-09-2007, 07:44 AM
Jewish haunt the maze
Carpenters soaked by the sky
A toilet blockage

Vercci
14-09-2007, 10:58 AM
Jewish haunt the Oatmeal
Carpenters soaked by the sky
A toilet blockage

Sebas
14-09-2007, 11:09 AM
Quick lesson in haiku:

It's 5 syllables, 7, 5. Not 6, 7, 5 like the above, or 8, 9, 7 like some others.

I s'pose I shouldn't be whining since this is not even my thread, but meh.


Dogs haunt the Oatmeal
Carpenters soaked by the sky
A toilet blockage

Vercci
14-09-2007, 11:15 AM
How the hell did I forget that :D

Seriously, gotta kick myself for that....


Dogs hunt the Oatmeal
Carpenters soaked by the sky
A toilet blockage

TheMattfish
14-09-2007, 02:42 PM
Dogs hunt the Oatmeal
Carpenters soiled by the sky
A toilet blockage

Mister Qwerty
15-09-2007, 01:23 PM
Dogs hunt the Oatmeal
Carpenters soiled by the fly
A toilet blockage

RadioactiveHam
15-09-2007, 08:51 PM
Dogs hunt the Oatmeal
Ninja Cats soiled by the fly
A toilet blockage

TheMattfish
16-09-2007, 03:13 AM
Dogs hunt the Oatmeal
Ninja Cats soiled by the fly
A rectal blockage

Mister Qwerty
16-09-2007, 06:52 AM
Dogs hunt the Oatmeal
Ninja Cats soiled by the fly
A rectal exam

TheMattfish
16-09-2007, 07:24 AM
Dogs squash the Oatmeal
Ninja Cats soiled by the fly
A rectal exam

RadioactiveHam
18-09-2007, 09:02 PM
Dogs squash the Oatmeal
Ninja Cats spoiled by the fly
A rectal exam

TheMattfish
19-09-2007, 05:35 AM
Dogs squash the Oatmeal
Ninja Cats spoiled by the fire
A rectal exam

Mister Qwerty
20-09-2007, 04:19 PM
Chavs squash the Oatmeal
Ninja Cats spoiled by the fire
A rectal exam

woody_tng
20-09-2007, 04:20 PM
Chavs squash the Oatmeal
Ninja Cats spoiled by the foam
A rectal exam

Mister Qwerty
23-09-2007, 11:41 AM
Chavs squash the shreddies
Ninja Cats spoiled by the foam
A rectal exam

StumpyMcGoat
24-09-2007, 04:39 PM
chavs squash the shreddies
Ninja cats spoiled by the floam
A recatal exam

TheMattfish
01-10-2007, 08:32 AM
Chavs shot the shreddies
Ninja cats spoiled by the floam
A rectal exam

big-chip
01-10-2007, 09:41 PM
Chavs shot the shreddies
Ninja cats spoiled by the milk
A rectal exam

woody_tng
01-10-2007, 09:44 PM
Chavs shot the shreddies
Love cats spoiled by the milk
A rectal exam

StumpyMcGoat
02-10-2007, 04:18 PM
Chavs shot the shreddies
Love cats spoiled by the milk
A rectal fungus

woody_tng
02-10-2007, 04:42 PM
Chavs shot the sheriff
Love cats spoiled by the milk
A rectal fungus

StumpyMcGoat
02-10-2007, 05:18 PM
Chavs banged the sherrif
Love cats spoiled by the milk
A rectal fungus

woody_tng
02-10-2007, 11:59 PM
Chavs banged the slapper
Love cats spoiled by the milk
A rectal fungus

TheMattfish
03-10-2007, 02:35 PM
Chavs banged the slapper
Love Jatz spoiled by the milk
A rectal fungus

RadioactiveHam
03-10-2007, 03:36 PM
Fish banged the slapper
Love Jatz spoiled by the milk
A rectal fungus

TheMattfish
03-10-2007, 03:45 PM
Fish banged with slapper
Love Jatz spoiled by the milk
A rectal fungus

StumpyMcGoat
03-10-2007, 03:51 PM
Fish banged with Papa
Love jats spoiled by the milk
a rectal fungus

TheMattfish
03-10-2007, 03:56 PM
Fish banged with Papa
Love cream spoiled by the milk
a rectal fungus

StumpyMcGoat
03-10-2007, 04:01 PM
Fish banged with Papa
Dove cream spoiled by the milk
a rectal fungus

woody_tng
04-10-2007, 04:26 PM
Fish banged with pepper
Dove cream spoiled by the milk
a rectal fungus

StumpyMcGoat
04-10-2007, 05:07 PM
Salt banged with pepper
Dove cream spoiled by the milk
a rectal fungus

woody_tng
07-10-2007, 11:41 PM
Salt Mixed with pepper
Dove cream spoiled by the milk
a rectal fungus

TheMattfish
10-10-2007, 03:22 AM
Salt mixed with pepper
Dove cream spoiled by the shart
a rectal fungus

French Bread
11-10-2007, 09:01 PM
Salt mixed with pepper
Dove cream spoiled by the shart
a rectal funtime

woody_tng
11-10-2007, 10:32 PM
Salt sings with pepper
Dove cream spoiled by the shart
a rectal funtime

TheMattfish
14-10-2007, 02:33 PM
Salt sings with pepper
Dove cream spoiled by the shart
a joyful funtime

Mister Qwerty
14-10-2007, 02:36 PM
Salt sings with pepper
Dove cream spoiled by the shart
a joyful fire